The badly written introduction of the game on this page makes me worry about the quality of the writing in the game. Still.... The story is interesting enough that I'll give it a tentative try despite it. (Which totally have nothing to do with me being desperate and scraping the bottom of the barrel for romance games that MAY be dark. Nope. Not at all.)
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The writing in the game is a bit better than on this page, thankfully. But you can see it's the same writer...
Is there a reason why the mc believes that a person you meet in broad daylight is a vampire? Like... is the artwork from a generic pack and there wasn't a nightscene there? Or is it intentional to show how deluded the mc is?
Of course, if he IS a guy with nothing to hide, then Dalton is clearly crazy too. (Or he just want to get laid. lol) Cuz it's a pretty abnormal reaction to, well.... HER behavior. lol
....I'm starting to think he works for the mafia or something. >_> He is WAY too friendly and inviting towards a crazy-person to not hide something. ....and want to get her somewhere private so he can kill her and dump her in the river or something.
Dalton is kinda cute tho. His attitude and all. 😂
...I am beginning to wonder if english is not the native language of the creator. The writing isn't terrible, but here and there is....really weird. Like saying "I'm like this more often", instead of saying "I'm like this most the time" or "This is what I'm usually like."
I get a feeling the writer is pretty new to writing. Much of the conversations are blunt and without any sub-text.
It's not the best writing I've ever seen, but the story itself is actually really interesting.
Premise aside, I think this game is half a step away from being a good fit for the next yandere jam. Based on the mc's behavior.
....I take it back. It doesn't even need modifications. She's practically there. xD
The game really DO keep you questioning what he really is tho. 😂
.....aaaand the reasons this is a yandere story just doubled. 😂 After the...er...knife-scene sleepover.
...huh. I got the Bad Ending, and I don't for the life of me understand why....
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IS there more than one ending in this game? Cuz I can't seem to find it.
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Overall....
The artwork is nothing special, but not bad either.
The writing is.... just a little bit better than the description on this page.
But the story itself is really intriguing. (Although I DO wish there was a better answer as to what he really is at the end. They seem a little bit like two peas in a pod. Said pod being a padded cell. But I could be wrong.... it's VERY ambiguous.)
The stalker-crazy parts was an interesting touch tho. (And obvious from the start.)
I think that if this story was polished a bit it would be a great story.
Maybe have them meet at night, not day --to keep people guessing if he is or isn't a vampire. It makes more sense she keeps insisting if she never sees him in daylight, for example.
And practice writing-skills and/or the english language.
I'd love to see a longer version of this as well. And perhaps an ending that explained what exactly he is properly.
I'd also love to find the happy ending, but I can't seem to find the choices that make up a happy ending. And I find it hard to believe that avoiding romantic options could ever lead to anything happy.
This game is GREAT! I've only played Aleisha's route because I had my eyes on this route since the beginning and I can only say that the good ending was really cute. I was worried at the beginning that Cherise would annoyed me but I find that her passion for vampire was credible and I really loved her. Plus, I liked the explanation about vampire nature, it's change of what we're used to see.
Thank you for liking and playing our game :) I've made a playthrough for everyone who gets stuck with getting the desired endings. You can read it here: Genjitsukai Playthrough
Very fun game, Aleisha's route put the kind of grin on my face that I don't want to have but just can't shake off because the two of them are just too adorable together. So much blush ///. Dalton a bit less because the flirting badboy is never really that much to my taste but his good end was still nice. I was kinda rooting for Dalton to be a regular human all along or a different kind of mythical creature (There's no such thing as vampires, silly. I'm a fairy, see?) just for the anticlimactic reaction that Cherise would've had on it.
Aww! Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked Aleisha's route so much. It's true that they are very adorable : ) Haha, that's alright. Everyone has their own tastes. I LOVE that idea about the fairy - I wish I would have thought of it. It's true that I (as the writer) do wish to one day make a fairy game so I laughed when I read that. The "good ends" are actually also the TRUE ends of the games. Thank you for playing our game and commenting ^^
Hey! Thank you for showing interest in our games, we appreciate it! : ) I'm glad you've enjoyed the game and I'm sorry that it wasn't as long as you wished for. I can promise that Secrets will definitely be longer than Genjitsukai.
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The badly written introduction of the game on this page makes me worry about the quality of the writing in the game.
Still.... The story is interesting enough that I'll give it a tentative try despite it.
(Which totally have nothing to do with me being desperate and scraping the bottom of the barrel for romance games that MAY be dark. Nope. Not at all.)
-
The writing in the game is a bit better than on this page, thankfully.
But you can see it's the same writer...
Is there a reason why the mc believes that a person you meet in broad daylight is a vampire?
Like... is the artwork from a generic pack and there wasn't a nightscene there?
Or is it intentional to show how deluded the mc is?
Of course, if he IS a guy with nothing to hide, then Dalton is clearly crazy too.
(Or he just want to get laid. lol)
Cuz it's a pretty abnormal reaction to, well.... HER behavior. lol
....I'm starting to think he works for the mafia or something. >_>
He is WAY too friendly and inviting towards a crazy-person to not hide something.
....and want to get her somewhere private so he can kill her and dump her in the river or something.
Dalton is kinda cute tho. His attitude and all. 😂
...I am beginning to wonder if english is not the native language of the creator.
The writing isn't terrible, but here and there is....really weird.
Like saying "I'm like this more often", instead of saying "I'm like this most the time" or "This is what I'm usually like."
I get a feeling the writer is pretty new to writing.
Much of the conversations are blunt and without any sub-text.
It's not the best writing I've ever seen, but the story itself is actually really interesting.
Premise aside, I think this game is half a step away from being a good fit for the next yandere jam.
Based on the mc's behavior.
....I take it back. It doesn't even need modifications. She's practically there. xD
The game really DO keep you questioning what he really is tho. 😂
.....aaaand the reasons this is a yandere story just doubled. 😂
After the...er...knife-scene sleepover.
...huh.
I got the Bad Ending, and I don't for the life of me understand why....
-
IS there more than one ending in this game?
Cuz I can't seem to find it.
-
Overall....
The artwork is nothing special, but not bad either.
The writing is.... just a little bit better than the description on this page.
But the story itself is really intriguing.
(Although I DO wish there was a better answer as to what he really is at the end.
They seem a little bit like two peas in a pod.
Said pod being a padded cell.
But I could be wrong.... it's VERY ambiguous.)
The stalker-crazy parts was an interesting touch tho.
(And obvious from the start.)
I think that if this story was polished a bit it would be a great story.
Maybe have them meet at night, not day --to keep people guessing if he is or isn't a vampire.
It makes more sense she keeps insisting if she never sees him in daylight, for example.
And practice writing-skills and/or the english language.
I'd love to see a longer version of this as well.
And perhaps an ending that explained what exactly he is properly.
I'd also love to find the happy ending, but I can't seem to find the choices that make up a happy ending.
And I find it hard to believe that avoiding romantic options could ever lead to anything happy.
Does anyone need a walkthough because I need one for real life and every game XD Seriously is there a walkthough for this game?
(there are less choices in the dudes route yet I can't get the good ending T_T )
You can find the walkthrough here :)
Thanks!
Yeah... Alisha is adorable and cute... and smart... and she has even more advantages.
Art style of game is of course good too.
I really like the story. About love, understanding each other and accepting all the defects. Very beatufil and romantic ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Aleisha is so sweet and adorable, I loved her route, thank you very much for doing this game !
We're glad you've liked her route. Thank you for playing our game!
This game is GREAT! I've only played Aleisha's route because I had my eyes on this route since the beginning and I can only say that the good ending was really cute. I was worried at the beginning that Cherise would annoyed me but I find that her passion for vampire was credible and I really loved her. Plus, I liked the explanation about vampire nature, it's change of what we're used to see.
Thanks you so much for making this game!
Aww, thank you so much. The compliment about Cherise and the explanation about vampire nature means a lot to me. Thank YOU for playing and liking it!
OH MY GOD! *fangirls* FFNNSRDGVNIPGWRE DALTON IS SOOOOO HHHHHOOOTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you :3 We hope you enjoy his route as much as his design~~
oh.....I did....I so very much did..... X3
this game is awesome but i keep getting dalton bad end any tips on how to get his good end?
Thank you for liking and playing our game :) I've made a playthrough for everyone who gets stuck with getting the desired endings. You can read it here: Genjitsukai Playthrough
okay thank you soo much keep up the great work
No problem :) and thank you!
Very fun game, Aleisha's route put the kind of grin on my face that I don't want to have but just can't shake off because the two of them are just too adorable together. So much blush ///. Dalton a bit less because the flirting badboy is never really that much to my taste but his good end was still nice. I was kinda rooting for Dalton to be a regular human all along or a different kind of mythical creature (There's no such thing as vampires, silly. I'm a fairy, see?) just for the anticlimactic reaction that Cherise would've had on it.
Aww! Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked Aleisha's route so much. It's true that they are very adorable : ) Haha, that's alright. Everyone has their own tastes. I LOVE that idea about the fairy - I wish I would have thought of it. It's true that I (as the writer) do wish to one day make a fairy game so I laughed when I read that. The "good ends" are actually also the TRUE ends of the games. Thank you for playing our game and commenting ^^
omg!! i love this game!! i wish it was longer!! but amazing job!! keep the games going im waiting for more!!!
Hey! Thank you for showing interest in our games, we appreciate it! : ) I'm glad you've enjoyed the game and I'm sorry that it wasn't as long as you wished for. I can promise that Secrets will definitely be longer than Genjitsukai.
oh yes i am waiting for that one tooo!!
Thank you :) At least we put the demo back on now! (In case you weren't aware yet) ^^
hahha i already played it and i love it tooo!! for a long time i tried to download but saw the post of you putting it back on!! lol